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The Netherlands designed a tulip for us to celebrate Canada's 150th anniversary. It's designed to look like the Canadian flag, and it's gorgeous.

I just wonder what a country so much older than us thinks of us getting so excited about 150 years.

Ticked off

Feb. 26th, 2017 01:53 pm
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It infuriates me when people put online information about me without checking with me first. I deliberately don't put the name of my city online, and that includes not referring to big events. I don't put my picture online because I don't want to. Yet a person who keeps her own location to herself mentioned mine in a post. A guy who knew me in junior high took my photo off my law firm's website and spread it all over the place without even telling me. It wasn't until I expressed how ticked off I was on Facebook that I learned who did it, and he protested that he was doing it as a favour, to help my sales or whatever. Don't do favours for people without checking that they want that favour done. If he's ever put a picture of himself online, I've never seen it. I can ask people to take this stuff down, but my picture is still out there, it pops up when someone googles my name. It's also years out of date. If anyone meets me in person, they'll think I put that inaccurate picture up to fool people, like someone on a dating site trying to lure in people by using an old picture.

It's genuinely baffling to me. If someone is careful not to put their own information online, why in the world do they think it's ok to put someone else's personal information online?

I will never stop being pissed off about that picture.
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I recently wrote a post about a horrific new bill from the Liberal party that would grant American border guards working at the pre-clearance stations in Canadian airports enormous powers to question, detain, and strip search people travelling from Canada to the US. There is, of course, some serious backlash against this terrible law, but that makes no difference to the Liberals. Trudeau is defending the bill by claiming that it will be reciprocal, as in Canadian border guards will be doing the same thing to people trying to pass from the States to Canadian. That people other than Canadians will be violated in the same way is just vile.

One of the loosey goosey limitations on the acts of the American border guards is, in theory, that the actions of the border guards can't violate Canadian law or Constitution because the activities will take place on Canadian soil. First, it's pretty clear that the border guards don't respect their own values. It would be idiotic to believe they would respect ours. Second, Canadian law demands a far lower standard of privacy at airports. Here's a quote from the article I will be linking: "it should be noted that in Canada under the Customs Act, a Border Services officer does not need to have individualized suspicion to search your luggage or other possessions."

Also, because Canada will have a law allowing the American border guards to do this, they won't be violating laws when they question, detain, and strip search whoever they want to.

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Finally, it has been announced that the Supreme Court of Canada will hear the appeals concerning whether law societies can be forced to accredit Trinity Western University's potential law school despite the university's discriminatory practices. I will be reading as many court documents as I can find. I imagine there will be a ton of intervenors.

The nature of the case is interesting. The BC law society lost at both court levels while the Ontario law society won. They operate with different statutes. The BC law society says the university's practices violate the equality rights of a bunch of different people, while the Ontario society focused only on members of the LGBTQ community. I anticipate that the Supreme Court decision will be very long.


Feb. 15th, 2017 09:14 pm
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By the end of the heroes series, I was kind of burnt out with the idea of romance plots. Part of it was because I was required to give the romantic plot more prominence in the sixth book, and that's probably why I gave so little attention to the romantic aspect of the Lee/Taro relationship in the seventh book.

But also it just feels like there is always a romantic relationship shoe-horned into every story. I was reading a mystery where the male cop got a female partner, and I was thinking, ugh, another romance, but then they didn't sleep together and I was happy. Then they did sleep together and I wasn't, especially as the sex ruined everything, which is probably realistic, but I loved their platonic relationship. It seemed a waste.

Watching Downton Abbey, I was worried that once Tom and Mary lost their spouses and developed a close relationship, they would be matched up. I was relieved they didn't, and loved their platonic relationship.

I hated the romantic plot in A Knight's Tale. It didn't even make sense. Jasmine spent all that time talking about how she wanted a man who spoke to her instead of caring only about her beauty, but almost all of her conversations with Will were about her looks. I loved the other characters and their relationships and didn't think the romance plot was necessary.

I'm not saying romance isn't a valuable, worthwhile subject, just that I don't think it needs to be everywhere. I'd like to see more friendships that are the most important relationships in the characters' lives. More band of brothers stories where the sexes are mixed, and not just one female character who is pining after the guy in charge. A gay character with a straight character and neither one tries to "convert" the other.

So my last three books don't have any romance in them. It wasn't like I'd banned romance, just that I didn't feel like putting any in the books. But in Ottawa 2027, I've thought of introducing one. I had an idea that would make it fun. I don't know if it'll make it through the first draft. I guess I've found enough books and shows that don't have romance that I've cleansed my palate.

When I was younger, if the story didn't have romance, I wouldn't read it. There was a book written by a writer I enjoyed, but I didn't like it because of the lack of romance. I recently picked it up again, thinking I'd like it better this time around. No. Still boring.
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The liberal party has introduced, and will therefore pass, a bill that gives American border guards in airports that enable pre-clearance very broad and, at the same time, ill-defined powers. I've read the bill, and it appears that the border guards can detain Canadians while on Canadian soil, with the reasons for doing so poorly defined, can strip search under vaguely defined circumstances, and can use force that causes grievance bodily harm and even death if they deem it justified. I've seen nothing about having a right to a lawyer. While we all know that Muslims, and those suspected of being Muslims, as well as people of colour, will be the primary targets, no one is really safe once the bill is enacted. Here's a link to the bill:
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I had someone over last night who mentioned a business called lease busters. I had never heard of it before and have never searched for any services like that. For the first time, an ad for lease busters showed up on my Facebook page. My laptop was in the room but turned off. Should I be worried?


Feb. 7th, 2017 01:00 pm
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I'm doing a project that involves checking out every lawyer in the city, mostly to determine what areas of law they practise in. This is made more difficult by the fact that a surprising number of lawyers around here don't have websites. Time to join the 21st century, guys. It's just a good thing that I live in a relatively small city.

When there's no website, I google the name to see what I can find online about them. So I search one particular guy. The first link goes to another kind of list of lawyers, with his picture. The third link leads to an article about a lawyer with this guy's name being the first lawyer from this city to be disbarred for sexual assault. He assaulted a client. And the picture for that article is the same picture that's on the other list.

Just to make sure, I confirmed that, yes, he's still practising. I went to the law society website. It states that his licence was revoked.

Holy cow.

I reported him, of course. It takes some serious brass to continue to work after being disbarred in such a way that it was reported in a regular newspaper, without even moving to another city. What's up with all of the other lawyers in this city? Did every single one fail to see the case about this guy?

So this is a lesson to google any professional before hiring them. You never know what might turn up.
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I hate motivational posters and inspirational quotes, because a lot of them are sanctimonious crap. They often involve shaming people with mental illnesses for taking medication to treat their medical conditions, claim all you need to do to be happy is to choose to be happy (even typing that made me roll my eyes), scold employees for failing to give their all for a job in which they will be treated like crap by the employers, or are stupid opinions given respect simply because they came from famous people.

The only place of work I endured which sported motivational postures was one of the worst jobs I ever had. It was a bookstore, and the owners were vicious people who violated employment law. Seriously, they called one employee a week before Christmas and told them not to bother coming in again. No warning, no notice. Illegal, but what was a minimum wage worker going to do? They thought I was stupid enough to agree to be transferred to one of the locations that was far out of my way, demanding an hour commute each way, in which I would get no breaks because I would be working alone with no one to relieve me, with no raise in pay. I think I was supposed to think it was some kind of compliment. I said no.

One of the most ridiculous quotes given respect simply because of who said it was the following:

"In any moment of decision, the best thing you can do is the right thing, the next best thing is the wrong thing, and the worst thing you can do is nothing." - Theodore Roosevelt

I have mentioned this quote before. I think it's ridiculous to claim the wrong thing is better than doing thing. The wrong thing is, by it's very nature, going to do damage. That's why it's the wrong thing. Damage may result from doing nothing, but at least it's not a certainty. It's kind of like talking. If what you're going to say is a valid contribution, say it. If all you've got to say is a lie or needlessly destructive, don't say it. Say nothing. You won't look like an idiot or a jerk, and you won't damage anyone else.

Anyway, I can't be the only one to feel this way. So the book would have a list of these "inspirational" nonsense and a rant about why they are, at best, useless, and, at worst, destructive.
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The other day I was talking to someone who is writing a novel. She told me about some advice she'd gotten from the spouse of a published writer. So, someone who wasn't actually a writer but felt qualified to give advice about writing because her husband was.

I can't remember all of the horrible advice this totally-not-qualified person gave my friend, because there was so much of it, but two things leaped out. The first, to strive to have as little dialogue as possible. Why? Because, she said, dialogue did nothing to develop the characters or move the plot. The second, never have any of your characters swear. Ever.

Did I mention my friend's novel takes place in the military, and she served in Afghanistan?

I was horrified and told my friend to dismiss anything the other woman told her, because it sounded more like a description of her personal tastes than an objective view of good writing.

Fortunately, my friend is reading a bunch of novels that use military characters and has seen that not only is there a lot of dialogue, but there is a lot of swearing. That's why people need to read books and not just rely on advice. There's a lot of BS out there and reading will tell new writers how to recognise bad advice.
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I haven't felt inclined to write. I've been doing stuff, but have been feeling kind of blah about everything.

I don't know if I've mentioned this before, but I have very recently started volunteering for the Victorian Order of Nurses, a non-profit organization that provides a lot of services for senior citizens. I prefer doing office stuff, because I'm a bit of a geek who enjoys organizing information, and they like that because apparently few volunteers like working in the office. So it works for everyone. What I'm doing now is typing out interviews that were taped. It's taking longer than I expected. The first interview was particularly challenging as the interviewee didn't speak very well. I had to listen again and again and again to try to decipher what she was saying, and in some places I just couldn't. A 24 minute interview took me days to type.

Before yesterday, I hadn't worked on my book for about two weeks or so. I was stuck and, again, not inclined to work on it. But I got an idea while walking and wrote about a thousand words yesterday. I came up with a really silly idea that I'm keeping unless, at some point in the future, and editor says I MUST take it out. I have a new idea for a subplot. I was worried that because I won't be self-publishing this one, and it is highly unlikely a traditional publisher would take it, I might have lost interest in writing altogether. I am happy to be able to say that this is not so.

Speaking of self vs. traditional publishers, I looked up Canadian publishing companies to see if the industry had become less snobbish. Because the book takes place in Ottawa, a Canadian company might be interested in it despite the fact that it's not literature. What I found was a confusing list that included traditional and self-publishing companies in a confusing manner. Obviously, I have nothing against self-publishing companies as long as they're not trying to rip off the writers, but on this list, some self-publishing companies looked as though they are traditional. Someone with experience can spot the nature of those companies, but a writer without experience could easily be misled. Scummy.

And speaking of scummy, one of the traditional companies on the list is. They want all rights, including movie and audio and other rights usually left to the author. They also wanted world rights, not just North America or whatever. Advance royalties to be negotiated. It's appalling.

Books Entry

Jan. 2nd, 2017 02:05 pm
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November 23, 2016

Warning, this book came from rage, so anvilicious you should probably wear a hard hat. Please take advantage of the ability to read the first few chapters before buying.

The war between Aldance and Amnisa has been dragging on for three years, and it is past time Aldance put a stop to it. The Aldench have their chance when they learn that the secret to the Amnisans' endurance is their bokra grounds, a rare soil that enhances the health of soldiers, crops, and livestock. Knowing that stealing these grounds will crush the will of the enemy, the military picks a team to perform that task. Edana Carver, charismatic and brash, has never led an expedition before, but such a simple assignment is the perfect opportunity for her to gain some experience. Manis il Havoc, with the ability to crack locks and get into places she shouldn’t be, is bitter over her recent demotion, but no one doubts her intelligence. Damohn Niles, young and pretty, is a talented medic with something to prove. Frayne, the foreigner, is a wonder on the battlefield and a little too secretive. Together, they were more than capable of striking deep into the heart of Amnisa, taking what they wanted, and destroying anything that got in their way.

Available through all amazons, Barnes&Noble, ibooks, Kobo, and other e-reading companies. Also available at smashwords through all e-readers:

October 20, 2015

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Alcina Noatak had grown up knowing she would one day be the High Scribe of Gydnerth, but that day was not supposed to arrive so soon. Responsible for drafting the laws that rule her country, Alcina must navigate intrigue and danger no one could have expected her to anticipate, and one wrong move could blow apart not just her life, but the lives of everyone around her.

Available through smashwords, which can accommodate any e-reader and provide pdf downloads, here and through amazon. I'm providing the US link, but you can get it at any Amazon.

Chapter One online:

Chapter Two online:


Catherine is a happy novelist, but a little strapped for cash, so the six-week job at computer software company Create and Conquer is a welcome chance to make some extra money. She meets the CEO, Lance MacCallan, on her very first day. He’s gorgeous, rich, admired by all around him, and a total bully.

But it’s not the attacks on her competence or the threats to fire her that have Catherine rattled. No, it’s when the CEO starts trying to convince her to go out with him that things get really unpleasant.

Available through Smashwords. The book can be downloaded to a variety of e-readers, including kindle, and can be downloaded as a pdf to your computer. $2.99 US.

Available through Amazon here:

A portion of the author’s royalties is donated to organisations working with survivors of abuse. Currently, the organisation is the Ontario Coalition of Rape Crisis Centres. Please follow the link to see the kind of work they do.

Shield Dunleavy Mallorough and Source Shintaro Karish have lived in Flown Raven for five years, protecting its residents from natural disasters and enjoying the lack of interference from both the council of the Triple S and the Emperor. When they are unexpectedly summoned to Shidonee’s Gap by the council, Lee and Taro learn that while they have been living at their isolated post, there have been a lot of changes in the world, changes that will drag them into unimaginable duties and unprecedented danger.

E-versions are available through Smashwords and can be downloaded to a variety of e-readers, including kindle, apple i-pad, personal computers, i-phone, sony, kobo, android, and others. If you don't have an e-reader, you can download it as a pdf file. You have the option of getting it for free or paying if you want. If you choose to pay, you can pick any amount you want. It's here:

You can get it on Amazon for anywhere from 80 cents to 99 cents, depending on the day and time. This is the amazon link:

The list of short stories in the Triple S world is here:
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One of my Facebook friends commented on a thread that was one of their friends', not one of mine. I usually don't comment on strangers' threads, but I felt compelled to this time. The stranger had posted that he needed $2,000 to self-publish his book, and from his other comments I gathered that he was not talking about hiring a freelance editor/cover artist/formatter, but paying a vanity press for a "publishing" package. I hesitated before commenting, because he was a stranger, but I had to at least warn him that he might be falling for a scam. Once, I was told by a friend of my mother that her niece - the friend's niece, not my mother's - had decided to write her book, quit her job to do so, spent a couple thousand on a marketing package, and was then convinced by the company to buy one thousand copies of the book to sell herself. I spent the whole time thinking, "Why didn't they ask me?" Every person my mother knows has been informed I've published books. Since then, I have felt compelled to warn someone when I see them approaching that trap.

I don't know whether I convinced him not to take this route, but he did give me the name of the company he was contemplating using, Tellwell, and yeah, it's one of the bottom feeders.

The cheapest publishing package is $1,499. For that, you get a front and back cover and interior formatting, stuff you can get for far cheaper, and a "comprehensive paperback distribution to 39,000 booksellers worldwide," which just means it's available to 39,000 booksellers, and bookseller isn't defined. You get 100% of the royalties, because once the book is created the company has made it's money from you and doesn't care about sales, and you retain the copyright, as you would with a traditional publishing company. You get ISBNs, which are free in Canada, and this is a Canadian company. Bunch of other stuff that is either meaningless or stuff that can be more cheaply gotten elsewhere.

I like this bit from the next cheapest publishing package, at $2,999: "We’ll also write a press release and provide a targeted media list to help you get started!" That means the writer has to contact/annoy those media resources. The next package is $4,999, and includes some editing and an author website. All of this can be bought by the writer from freelancers at a significantly lower price. The highest priced package is $8,999 and includes: "Our full marketing support includes an author website, press release and media outreach. We get your name in the press, and work to get it on bookshelves." They write the release, "media outreach" is a meaningless term, "press" isn't defined, and "work to get it on bookshelves" is not any guarantee that the book will actually end up on bookshelves. From what I understand, most bookstores aren't interested in carrying self-published books. I've seen some independent bookstores willing to carry self-published books but demand a monthly amount simply to display the books and a share of the royalties. Unless you put your book at an incredibly high price, you actually lose money even if the books sell.

I suspect the stranger isn't going to take my advice. In my limited experience, people don't want to be told that the path they're getting so excited about is a bad one.

ETA There is a very polite response from a Tellwell representative in the comments. It doesn't change my mind, but it is an interesting read.
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Since I've posted. Probably because nothing has really happened, except I've gotten a cold and I could probably provide the voice for Darth Vader. This means I can't go to the gym, something I started doing regularly about 8 weeks ago, because I'm not going to be contagious in a place where people share equipment. I don't want to fall out of a habit it took a lot of effort to start, especially as it really cuts down on my headaches.

I'm about half-way through the first draft of Ottawa 2027. It's the first time I've written a book without a firm outline since Heroes Adrift. Well, really the CEO, but I don't really count that one. CEO was such a short book with such a simple plot that it didn't demand an outline. After the third or so draft of 2027, I'll have to go to downtown Ottawa to get the descriptions of various sites and streets down. Right now I just have (GO TO PLACE) written everywhere. I've moved farther away from Ottawa, unfortunately, and the downtown core has turned into a nightmare of construction. Some Sunday I'll drive in and spend the day checking out all of the sites at once. A big part of the job will be going over the grounds of Parliament Hill, where an important scene will take place. It's got a lot of statues.

Yesterday, a young man I haven't had any real contact with messaged me through Facebook out of the blue. Throughout the exchange, I was wondering if he wanted something, but it was all very banal. Maybe he was really bored?


Nov. 29th, 2016 08:01 pm
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I'm keeping an eye on job sites because, hey, you never know. This one site has a wide range of possible jobs, from working at the university to working at a store. One entry, involving working at a warehouse, jumped out at me because of the annual salary. I used a calculator just to make sure that, yes, the salary was lower than the minimum wage by over $4. In the part of the application where one could, if they wanted, copy and paste their resume, I wrote that I wasn't applying and asked if they were aware that the minimum wage in Ontario was $11.40 an hour. I didn't expect a response, but I got one. They want me to come in for an interview. Clearly, this is a well-run operation.

Trudeau has approved three oil pipes so far. All that rhetoric about cleaning up the environment was garbage. Scribe in Shadows was influenced by Harper's evil. I started the sequel last year but kind of lost steam after Harper got kicked out. Now, here I am, with Trudeau giving me all sorts of motivation. And wouldn't you know it, the sequel I started over a year ago focused on the destruction of the environment. But I won't start it until after I'm done the detective/sci-fi/ubran fantasy thing, which I'll be calling Ottawa 2027.

I have been suffering from poor sleep since I was a teenager, and I have been taking sleeping pills for years. Recently, I had to increase the dose because the former wasn't working, but this alarmed me, and it's definitely not good for the brain. My doctor, who is always continuing her education, gave me a few recommendations. I am passing this along only because it's harmless and I am amazed how well it works for me. After two weeks, I've cut the dose down to a third and I'm optimistic about being able to kick the drug entirely. Believe it or not, it involves listening to Sacral Chakra Tibetan Singing Bowl in D#. Yes, the note is important. It's an hour long, so you must have an hour to dedicate to it as part of your evening schedule. It doesn't put you to sleep so much as prepare your mind and body for sleep, but since the first night, I've fallen asleep minutes within turning it off. And you have to listen with earphones, because there are different sounds for each ear.

I've been telling everyone because this is the best I've been sleeping since I was a kid.

Don't change your doses without your doctor's supervision.

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The Easy Expedition is available through all amazons, Barnes and Noble, Kobo, ibooks, and so on. It is also available through

Warning, this book came from rage, so anvilicious you should probably wear a hard hat. Please take advantage of the ability to read the first few chapters before buying.

The war between Aldance and Amnisa has been dragging on for three years, and it is past time Aldance put a stop to it. The Aldench have their chance when they learn that the secret to the Amnisans' endurance is their bokra grounds, a rare soil that enhances the health of soldiers, crops, and livestock. Knowing that stealing these grounds will crush the will of the enemy, the military picks a team to perform that task. Edana Carver, charismatic and brash, has never led an expedition before, but such a simple assignment is the perfect opportunity for her to gain some experience. Manis il Havoc, with the ability to crack locks and get into places she shouldn’t be, is bitter over her recent demotion, but no one doubts her intelligence. Damohn Niles, young and pretty, is a talented medic with something to prove. Frayne, the foreigner, is a wonder on the battlefield and a little too secretive. Together, they were more than capable of striking deep into the heart of Amnisa, taking what they wanted, and destroying anything that got in their way.
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So I've done some number crunching.

I have said in the past that I wouldn't again seek to be published by a traditional publishing company because authors get a really raw deal, and my editors demanded changes that forced me to have characters behaving in a manner that contradicted the nature I have given them, or screwed up parts of the plot. However, I am starting a new business, and I can't justify the cost of self-publishing another novel right now, especially as I haven't made back what I spent on my last two books.

But I will not sign a contract with a litigation clause that puts all of the cost of any court action on me while depriving me of any control over how the defense is conducted. That is not negotiable. If I can't get a contract without that clause removed, then I simply won't publish the book at all until I'm in a position to pay the costs. Nor will I sign anything with a non-competition clause, because they have no right to keep me from writing whatever I want whenever I want. I wonder if I can get a clause that gives me some influence over the cover, or that says, "Covers can't be ugly."

I'll keep writing, though, whether I can publish this book or not. Maybe some year I'll publish multiple books, having created a backlog.

I think I have a better chance of getting this book published through a traditional publisher than I had with earlier books. The subject matter might be more appealing to more readers.

Writing for an American company means having to use American spelling again. It had been so nice, in the last few books, to write naturally. Now I have to omit all the u's and the double consonants and whatnot.


Nov. 13th, 2016 01:06 pm
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About a week ago, I wrote about how much I was enjoying reading what I had wrote, to date, of my detective/sci-fi/urban fantasy thing, and I was, but upon getting to the end of it, I was left thinking, "Uh, now what?" For some reason, I hadn't written the entire outline, which I usually do as part of my process. And I had only a vague idea about where to go next.

And for a week, no ideas came to me, even on my walks, which usually brings ideas to me. I was getting worried, because I've never been blocked for so long. To my relief, once I sat down at my favourite cafe with a big mug of cafe mocha, ideas started flowing, and some of them connected wonderfully with stuff I'd introduced in the beginning with the idea of those characters and concepts being one shot situations.

There is a subplot I may have to ditch, though. If I do, I'll have to figure out how to weave in the important parts while doing without the subplot that introduced those parts.



Nov. 5th, 2016 12:00 pm
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This morning I started reading what I've so far written on the detective/urban fantasy/sci-fi book, and I am really liking it. It's great to feel really enthusiastic about something again. It looks like it's going to be significantly shorter than my other books, about 80,000 words, and I've already got nearly half that.


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